Critique please? Panasonic Lumix Cameras - The Official Camera Of The U.S. Olympic Team

Last Update: July 29, 2012
//www.squidoo.com/panasonic-lumix-cameras-the-official-camera-of-the-u-s-olympic-team

I'm looking for some feedback on my latest Squidoo Lens if anyone is interested. I'd appreciate it. I will need to change the pictures and add larger ones so, keep that in mind. I know the ones one there now are too small.

Also, there is Not a lot of script on this one, I'm linking it back to my main squidoo lens :

"Panasonic Lumix Cameras" - 3 Tips So You don't Buy Camera Regrets".
http://www.squidoo.com/panasonic-lumix-digital-cameras-3-tips-so-you-dont-buy-camera-regrets

I'd really love to hear your honest opinions and if you were in the market for a camera, would these 2 articles convince you.

Appreciate it!
Meredith

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mama2karsten Premium
Oh, I forgot to mention... Companies pay big bucks for those types of sponsorships. I would NOT get rid of the Olympic ones for sure. And I think the lenses look very nice. Some people like a lot of info and some don't. If someone is legitimately interested in a specific product they want to know as much as that can to help themselves make a buying decision. You are looking for hot buyers that are ready to click so you can earn money. Good luck.
You're right about paying for the "rights". I checked online and panasonic has been with the Olympics since the 1984 Los Angeles Games.
mama2karsten Premium
because of use of the phrase "Panasonic Lumix Cameras Chosen as the Official Camera For The U.S. Olympic Team." (which is a very important point) This tells me that Panasonic, as one of the primary sponsors of the Olympics, has paid for the right
( through sponsorship from the Olympic Committee) they have likely worked out a deal that gives exposure to the Olympics in wherever their products are featured. They have also obviously chosen specific keywords to target with a mouseover. That is not a bad association... gives you some additional legitimacy. Scottrade is also a sponsor. They have also worked out a similar deal regarding the keywords they are linked to.
I know what that is, mama2karsten...it's if you give permission for Squidoo to place adds on your lenses and you get a few bucks each month. So, if that's what this is, I can control it by checking No to their Adds.
mama2karsten Premium
In the 2nd lense posted, the link associated with the word "selling" brings up a scottrade ad. I don't think your users would appreciate that link when they are trying to access additional info on the camera. I would think you would want to send them to a landing page on your site instead of scottrade.
Thank you, don't know if I have Any Control over that but, you're right, that is Not good. If, anybody knows the answer please let me know. Overall, did you like either?
WayneBPK Premium
I dont know much about this stuff but from the look it was very nice and almost made me want to read it. Even though it hot a tad long. Was that on purpose?
Thanks Wayne, which was too long, the 1st article? Yes, that's what I'm wanting, varying opinions so I know what y'all are thinking. I can shorten them however, I believe that both are a pretty standard Squidoo Lens length. Maybe you're on to something...keep them shorter and less products too. Thank you, I appreciate it!
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