This last weekend I wrote my first article..( which is still waiting to be accepted by ezine.)  I also followed PotPieGirls tutorial on squidoo lenses.  I made this lens in like 35 minutes... it was easy.  The hardest part was finding something to do it on.... I think that will get easier as I go on.  I would like some feedback on what everyone thinks about my lens.  Do not hold back criticism, I am a big boy that can take it.  Thank you in advance.

MY LENS HERE