It seems to be the same thing repeated over and over again, not sure about the strategy about posting amazon links when your aiming to sell a clickbank product. To be completely honest within thirty seconds I was scanning the whole lens looking for a way out

Well,

I am an honest guy, first I am sour, then I am sweat haha... Ill help let me know..

Man that's what I wanted! Ok, I'll be hitting you up via email shortly. And thanks for the honest feetback my friend. :)

Hey,

Honestly, I dont beleive the information in the lens. It is boring and it needs to be broken up a lot. Less is more sort of thing. Give them what they need to know, and then send them on the the product. T

Put some more pictures up so that it keeps attention, and looks a little more interesting.

I don't see any keyword usage. Would you like help finding your keywords?

I can help you, PM me and we can talk.

I think you are wasting to much time, working on things that dont matter, I was in the same boat when I started too, so its no big deal, but you cant do a lot better with a little bit of help.

Let me know(:

Hmmm, was it THAT bad? No feedback at all..lol