Holy Moly, the language structure I used was very business-like. If I got messages like that I would wonder about the person who wrote them. Kyle told me how we write our welcome messages plays a big role in the referral completing their profile and income goals as well as communicating with their sponsor.

In our posts, the goal of our titles is the same. They have got to get the attention of the reader in a way that connects with what they are looking for.

The same applies to the message we write for our referrals. But more importantly, it is the titles of our messages that are more important than the message itself. By a small margin of course. They play a complementary role.