after my failure at trying to make a site dedicated to promoting potpie girls method of oneweekmarketing, i find myself at a loss. Im so new here that it hurts, and sometimes its too much to comprehend. Here's my site My site

Thats the link that i made. Any pointers on how i screwed up? im trying to understand keywords and all, and i keep just getting pointed into all of the wrong directions. Any help would be awesome right now, and thanks if you do :)