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creating my website
Last Update: June 15, 2012
well I am finally finishing my website, because family issuse had came up I couldn't get to it earlier. I am still trying to get the content finalized and I would like some other opionions. Please let me know how I can improve upon the site here is my link getmywealthyaffiliate.com anything you can tell me would be greatly appericated.
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frannymark
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Hi I'm Franny, just signed up and ready to start learning and making lots of friends and money
Beckywahm
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One thing I noticed was that your big 10 day free button at the bottom of your blog isn't linked to the offer. Add a link to that. It's calling me to action. I click it and I am taken to the picture's location instead of to a sign up page.
While I don't think that anyone has perfect grammar, I think that you may want to proof read your article because I found some simple mistakes that are easy to fix. Leaving them there may decrease your credibility (reminds me of spam emails and scam sites). If you're too grammatically perfect, however, it won't sound like a real person is reviewing it.
One example of a simple mistake: "There are over a thousands of people who are willing to help you with questions, and any problems that might come up."
I'd switch to either "There are thousands . . ." or "There are over a thousand. . ."
I like the pics of Kyle and Carson, the subheadings (e.g. "great support"), and the testimonials.
Looks great, just fix those minor details and you'll be in great shape, IMO.
While I don't think that anyone has perfect grammar, I think that you may want to proof read your article because I found some simple mistakes that are easy to fix. Leaving them there may decrease your credibility (reminds me of spam emails and scam sites). If you're too grammatically perfect, however, it won't sound like a real person is reviewing it.
One example of a simple mistake: "There are over a thousands of people who are willing to help you with questions, and any problems that might come up."
I'd switch to either "There are thousands . . ." or "There are over a thousand. . ."
I like the pics of Kyle and Carson, the subheadings (e.g. "great support"), and the testimonials.
Looks great, just fix those minor details and you'll be in great shape, IMO.
jchilders
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Congrats on getting your site up! It looks like you've got a good start going there.
A couple things...
Need to put Privacy Page, Affiliate Disclosure, About Me pages in there to please the Google gods...and the FTC gods for that matter. :)
Add 'Categories' for your posts...you don't want them to all fall under 'Uncategorized' That's one of the advantages of using posts since you can easily filter them by category and give your reader exactly what they want and need.
Spell check and grammar check everything.
Like I said, it's a good start but you don't want to just be a list of what WA is. Your reader wants to know how WA has helped you and how it can help them to succeed. That can come over time though.
Now that you've got it started, keep the momentum going and build on it!
Jon
A couple things...
Need to put Privacy Page, Affiliate Disclosure, About Me pages in there to please the Google gods...and the FTC gods for that matter. :)
Add 'Categories' for your posts...you don't want them to all fall under 'Uncategorized' That's one of the advantages of using posts since you can easily filter them by category and give your reader exactly what they want and need.
Spell check and grammar check everything.
Like I said, it's a good start but you don't want to just be a list of what WA is. Your reader wants to know how WA has helped you and how it can help them to succeed. That can come over time though.
Now that you've got it started, keep the momentum going and build on it!
Jon
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