It's a good start. One thing that stands out to me is the grammar and composition could be improved. You will lose credibility with a good share of readers even if your information is solid. I'd say presentation of information is even more important the information itself when it comes to this business. Most of the changes are minor but having another person proofread it may help you a lot. Respect is crucial, but I also think there's not enough value in the lens. You may want to consider putting in something more specific about earning respect as an affiliate marketer.