I asked a question in the forum and got a couple answers . and one of them was Kyle.  Wow he took time to reply to me.   He had some good advise and I will apply what he said.  Basically don't be so blah in my writing.   but keep on writing.  Answer the questions that people want answers to .  Benefits to them and write as if I am talking to them one heartbeat to another beat. 

Thanks Kyle for your time. and all of you.  

Smokey and I