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Last Update: July 22, 2012
Hi all
The new site is close to being live, and I have switched a bunch of stuff around and using Youtube almost exclusively. I have my landing page presentation done and really need the input. Its designed to funnel traffic to a self-assessment page, that leads to a call to action there. This has no buttons on it, nor is it linked back to BND yet.
If you have the time could please watch the video and check it out. All input in requested. I have several issues that I am wondering about, just not sure if I am being to picky, but I dont want to sway anything that will come this way by throwing them out there.
Thanks in advance all!!
Wayne
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tmN64cABfDQ
The new site is close to being live, and I have switched a bunch of stuff around and using Youtube almost exclusively. I have my landing page presentation done and really need the input. Its designed to funnel traffic to a self-assessment page, that leads to a call to action there. This has no buttons on it, nor is it linked back to BND yet.
If you have the time could please watch the video and check it out. All input in requested. I have several issues that I am wondering about, just not sure if I am being to picky, but I dont want to sway anything that will come this way by throwing them out there.
Thanks in advance all!!
Wayne
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tmN64cABfDQ
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klrrider
Premium
Watch it completely... I like it. I'm sure some improvements could be made but you could waste a lot of time trying to make it perfect.
Maybe to of-set those who like to read ahead you could have a video of the woman who is reading the info inserted into one of the corners.
I would move head and get this finished so as to start creating traffic. You can come back later and see if you can improve on what you have created.
The reason I say the above is I have done the same thing... only not as good as you. I figured I would come back later and upgrade the video but once everything was live it started making some bank and continues to this day, so I decided to leave things alone for now.
youtube.com/watch ?v=c6GnsjORM40
Maybe to of-set those who like to read ahead you could have a video of the woman who is reading the info inserted into one of the corners.
I would move head and get this finished so as to start creating traffic. You can come back later and see if you can improve on what you have created.
The reason I say the above is I have done the same thing... only not as good as you. I figured I would come back later and upgrade the video but once everything was live it started making some bank and continues to this day, so I decided to leave things alone for now.
youtube.com/watch ?v=c6GnsjORM40
Hudson
Premium
Wayne, like the structure and approach. Couple of small points which please take as constructive
1. Some of the letterring on the slides especially in Grey look fragmented and your attention is diverted from the message to this.
2. Is there a cost to the test?
3. Is the test available outside of your country - if not what to do?
4. Is there a disclaimer anywhere that protects you being sued for making claims which some may try to say are false?
5. Although the whole presentation is only 4.29 minutes, the message on the screen is easily read much more quickly than the voice message (sorry if these terms are naive). I found myself wanting to get on to the next slide before the voice message had finished - a little off putting.
Great start and hope these comments help you. Good luck going forward,
Regards
Hudson
1. Some of the letterring on the slides especially in Grey look fragmented and your attention is diverted from the message to this.
2. Is there a cost to the test?
3. Is the test available outside of your country - if not what to do?
4. Is there a disclaimer anywhere that protects you being sued for making claims which some may try to say are false?
5. Although the whole presentation is only 4.29 minutes, the message on the screen is easily read much more quickly than the voice message (sorry if these terms are naive). I found myself wanting to get on to the next slide before the voice message had finished - a little off putting.
Great start and hope these comments help you. Good luck going forward,
Regards
Hudson
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