Day 7 - Plugging away -
Here is my first WA blog, have 3 articles linked to it (if I don't do again what I did before and NOT link!) http://thewealthyaffiliatewaytoonlinesuccess.blogspot.com/ Feel free to comment, it may be over the top, too wordy, whatever - I know I will need to tweak.
I have soooo many blogs that have just been sitting there, and 4 out of the 6 domains I have purchased have nothing on them. That is what you get when you try to follow a program that does not have all the answers you need - still trying to absorb all I can here, I understand now why I have never been successful in all my tries at bat. Not enough information.
You can look at the website I made for my sister's business www.hawgcountryenterprises.com and the blog at www.hawgcountryfurniturerestoration.blogspot.com. Am I on the right track, do you think?
Remember - one of the promises I made my first day is to take constructive criticism and convert it to something good!
Your landing page doesn't instill that kind of confidence. When I see a page like that I don't even read the text. Just say bye bye. You asked for honest criticism. That is the way I feel.
Put together a folksy page, give them information, Some subtle links are good. The in your face promotion just turns people off.
Furniture refinishing - I love that cedar chest!!! Wow! (Hawg blog) I didn't notice pricing, but perhaps I missed it by not visiting every single page.
Furniture Restoration blog - some very nice content that is interesting to read. (I have a series of Squidoo lenses on woodworking, so reading your blog was enjoyable. )
I'm curious as to the books on the background, though ... I would have expected something less library and more workshop.
My only suggestion would be to break up the text into smaller chunks to make it easier for people to read.
Also putting in some paragraph headers in bold print would help - my understanding is that you can put keywords in those for a little extra google juice, but with all the recent changes, I could be all wet thinking that.
It would help the eyes track and if you hit the high notes in bold between sections, your reader will be more likely to see at a glance that there's something worth sticking around to read.
Hope this helps. Thanks for sharing.
first, for the WA blog, it is good, but people outside WA should be encouraged enough and you need to put in long hours on that blog. You need to write regular posts on several features inside WA in order to impress the visitors. You can get an idea from the emails sent to you By Kyle and Carson. Just try to grab the USP of WA and write on your own and promote it.Keep a comment section under the every blog post. Try to update your blog with at least 5 new posts per week. Once you have got some worthy content, it is time to promote your blog and you will come to know about it with in WA for sure. Just for the time being, you can ping your blog after every single post.You can use their service:http://pingomatic.com/
And for the furniture site, it looks Ok. Please remove the Marquee tag on home page, rather you should keep the TEXT fixed with some matching fonts and color.
Thanks.