Trying to get back to work.... Feedback Needed....
Last Update: June 26, 2012
Well with all the stress that has been going on in my life as of recent, my sites had been pushed to the back-burner for the time being. With less than a week left to my job, and no real knowledge of whether my contract will be extended, I finally made the decision to try and do a re-work on my IM website.
Part of this process requires the rewrite of a lot of old content, which is quite daunting, especially since the majority of it is overly salesy. After much struggle, I finally finished, and updated the first of many pages on my site and would love some feedback.
I tried to keep the content useful to the visitor by avoiding any links to WA or reference to my review, as it is a menu option on the site. Am I on the right path, or does the content still need some tweaking? Any feedback is greatly appreciated.
http://jensinternetmarketingguide.com/profiting-with-article-marketing/
P.S: The title of the page has changed, but I did not change the link as I have an existing article over at SA linking to it and wanted to avoid creating yet another redirect.
Part of this process requires the rewrite of a lot of old content, which is quite daunting, especially since the majority of it is overly salesy. After much struggle, I finally finished, and updated the first of many pages on my site and would love some feedback.
I tried to keep the content useful to the visitor by avoiding any links to WA or reference to my review, as it is a menu option on the site. Am I on the right path, or does the content still need some tweaking? Any feedback is greatly appreciated.
http://jensinternetmarketingguide.com/profiting-with-article-marketing/
P.S: The title of the page has changed, but I did not change the link as I have an existing article over at SA linking to it and wanted to avoid creating yet another redirect.
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Shawn Martin
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looks OK to me, I like the whole layout of the site myself, does it convert?